- Music going from non diegetic to diegetic was good
- Bringing the music back at the end provides a full circle
- Good choice of music - provides an ominous ambience
- Good use of alternative knife sounds
- Great foley work throughout
- There is never a static tune
- Good perspective from inside the bin
- The 'ah' from inside the bin gives the game away enough
- Does the bell sounding when he is being dragged inside give the game away too much?
- Good use of triggering sound before we see them
- The music sets a beautiful tone and was made into a motif
- Would have been nice to add the sounds of pipes when going through the tunnel as it lacks physicality
- Has a distinctive feel and quality of thought
- Some of the levels could have been higher, such as the bin scene
Overall, I am very happy with my comments on the final piece. I agree that the dustbin man scene could have been a little busier, and that the second bell could have been removed to keep the audience wondering what is happening. I was worried that the music might not be greatly received, as I did not want it to appear like I had put it on for the sake of it. However, thankfully everyone understood my reasonings and liked the tone and atmosphere that it added to the film.
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